...

The epiphany that strikes like lightning

leads my hand to the page.


The images flow into words

and the story pours onto the page.


A new world forms in my hands

and I will share it with you.

Saturday, December 10, 2011

Looking for Feedback

So, if the post I rewrote in first person was the first part of a book, would you read on?  Is there enough action?  Is the main character understandable and interesting?  What would you change?
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